![]() ![]() Cole is fantastic story, especially impressive since it’s told in few words! I never, ever could have predicted where the story would have gone and was completely shocked! And there was literally only one typo which is insane compared to every other story in this anthology! 5 STARS ⭐️⭐️⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ Worst of all was the ending which was extremely anti-climactic, especially since the first 99% of the story had been so good. There were sentences written in both past and present tense (“which means for all intents and purposes, I wanted Dalton.”), incorrect use of semicolons, comma rules omitted, etc. However, I was disappointed that it wasn’t proofread. I was immediately pulled into the short, innovative story. Blake, so I was eager to read something by her. 3 STARS ⭐️⭐️⭐️ĬHAMPAGNE DREAMS by Zoe Blake. It’s a fun read, but it is definitely not a good example of how incredibly talented Bene truly is. GOOD BOY by Jennifer Bene it’s definitely dark and the gang bang scenes very descriptive, yet there are a ton of proofreading mistakes. Stories not yet reviewed below will be added soon. ![]() Individual reviews for story listed below. ![]()
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